When I found out that I would have to write a essay describing myself in three word I knew It wasn't going to be easy.
I see that you capitalized "It" by mistake.. but... it must just be a typo.
I'll add some commas:
Ever since I was litt
le, I' ve always been smiling and laughing. If you saw me and my friend walking down the street
, you would probably see me laughing or joking about something. I feel like life is to short
, and everyone must be able to stop for a moment and have some fun. When my grandmother di
ed , I was so depressed that I stay at home for a whole week.
This essay has a nice quality that I cannot easily describe. It has a nice spirit. I think you should write a little more about your clear plan for the future, though.