The academic goal is acceptable and highly specific. It covers both an academic and professional reference. However, your personal goal is forgettable, uninformative, and does not really help the reviewer to understand what your personal interest in the course is or how your personal experiences have affected your decision to enroll in the course. The word interfere in the passage below represents incorrect word usage:
disease prevention and healthcare services that interferes strongly with my desire
Are you really telling the reviewer that you are interested in a course that is blocking or obstructing your desire to learn? I am sure you did not mean to refer to coming to an opposition about something related to healthcare right? Think about what you want to really say in that sentence and then, rewrite it. Aside from these observations, the overall statement is acceptable already as a response to the prompt.