scoffey92 2 / 2 Oct 31, 2008 #1I know it needs something added at the beginning, along with any other issues. Any help or suggestions?As a students, we read about all of these different epic heroes and heroines who save the heavens and Earth, using their extraordinary qualities and godly powers. I must admit, though I do not have any godly powers, I certainly have many extraordinary qualities.I help everyday people using my sympathy and empathetic abilities on a regular basis. My impendent nature makes it so that I do not need others to get by in my life. I am just one of the dwindling number of self-motivated high school teenagers whom work hard to stay advanced and "ahead of the game" for their grade level and/or age. I have built a 'bullet-proof' shield around myself to avoid peer pressure and negative influences. That is why I consider myself my own present-day heroine.
EF_Team5 - / 1,586 Nov 1, 2008 #2I like the super heroine analogy; it is very original and I think you can do much with it. You didn't post the prompt for the piece, so I'm not sure if it answers the question or not, but I think you're off to a running start. Keep up the hard work!
