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Help with UVA supplement: "Our Road"


jharker 1 / -  
Aug 22, 2010   #1
Hey all, I am having trouble with this UVa supplement, any help would be greatly appreciated.

Prompt----What work of art, music, science, mathematics, or literature has surprised,
unsettled, or challenged you, and in what way?---

Our Road
The pervading sense of danger created in The Road, made for and unsettling yet interesting experience, it was like being followed by a murderer and after days of running, and having lost everyone I loved, the murderer was finally caught- and I had become involved with the journey; the two main characters were on. To be involved so realistically with a book that deals with: cannibals, gruesome deaths, the apocalypse, and that always present sense of threat and danger, throws you into a state of anxiety, and anticipation for that next defeating event to occur, not only to the characters but also, to you. Yet, what unsettled me the most about the book, was not the fear of attack, it was the lack of an end goal- the characters had, and subsequently a lack of hope.

After having been through The Road's vivid and despairing portrayal of the world, I was relieved but also sickened. I was relieved to have ended the anxiety of its journey, yet sickened and unsettled by the images conjured up in its pages, and the lack of plans the characters had for the future. Their blind perseverance unsettled me to my core; their journey was like walking in the dark- we had no solid goals other than to stay alive.
greengrl247 1 / 11  
Aug 22, 2010   #2
I am not an expert or anything, but I think that if you maybe pick a character from the novel and try to relate the character with yourself that might be a more effective approach. Or if you atleast offer more specifics that would be good because I feel like this response is a little too vague.

I hope that helps a little bit!
greengrl247 1 / 11  
Aug 23, 2010   #3
PS: Can you take a look at my NYU supplement and give me some feedback? essayforum.com/undergraduate-admission-2/nyu-supplement-bri ng-person-special-place-18233/
Thanks!
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Aug 23, 2010   #4
Yet, what unsettled me the most about the book, was not the fear of attack, it was the lack of an end goal- the characters had, and subsequently a lack of hope.

Great analysis, Miller. This will be well-received.

blind perseverance unsettled me to my core--- nice!

I have no criticism for this!!

Actually, there is a little punctuation problem at the start...
The pervading sense of danger created in The Road (no comma necessary here) made for and unsettling yet interesting (you can use a better word) experience. It was lik e being followed by a murderer and after days of running, and having lost everyone I loved, the murderer was finally caught- and I had become involved with the journey (no semi-colon necessary) the two main characters were on.

:-)


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