profes 3 / 9 Sep 9, 2015 #1It's about 186 words. Help me clean my essay in order to fit the word limit and correct grammar mistakes. Thanks in advance !Please briefly elaborate on an extracurricular activity or work experience of particular significance to you. (Maximum: 175 words)It's a humanitarian duty. I picked my luggage and head to southern Tunisian-Libyan borders to work as a volunteer with Tunisian Red Crescent. I cooperated with vacationers, doctors and fugitives to confront death and poverty. While civil war torn Libya apart, I was taking care of refugees from different backgrounds and ethnicities. Being fluent in French, English and Arabic, I built strong relationships with Africans as well as other Arabs. When attacks intensify, villagers there reacted with fear and dismay to the news of death so I was ready to cope with pressure and call for optimism. Using details observations made during this insightful yet frightening experience, I was able to complement data collected from refugee's stories and wrote a short biography of my experience. Leaving camp in fall 2012, I gained deft social skills that helped me to engage further in community service. Now, I use my accounts to defend vociferously immigrants and refugees cause in my school and in national events and I'll be happy if I have the opportunity to use my field knowledge to speak up for them internationally.
L33n4 1 / 1 Sep 9, 2015 #2As civil war tore Libya (Apart), I took care of refugees (from/of) different...Not much but I hope it helps? 😛
