Any advice will be appreciated!! Please help me with my grammar mistakes. I LIKE advices, no matter if it's harsh =v=
Thanks for your help!
[Prompt: What do you miss most from your childhood? Please response to the question in one or two paragraphs.]
If you meet a girl, who can be easily fooled by a swindler, who can be astonished by a little gadget and who cannot answer any difficult academic question, you may sigh toward her, "Poor ignorant girl." However, in my childhood, when I had only learned little about the world, I was such a girl.
Although I have travelled to tens of countries and have met thousands of people and I can detect lies with no effort now, I miss that credulous girl who trusted everyone. In her world, the conception of fraud may have not been established. Romain Rolland once said," There is only one heroism in the world: to see the world as it is and to love it." Of course I love the colorful world I see now, both the bright and dark sides, but the pure world in my childhood is also memorable. Ignorance is sometimes despised, but I do miss it.
Although I have travelled to tens of countries and have met thousands of people,and I can detect lies with no effort now,I miss that credulous girl who trusted everyone . ... I think it's spelled "traveled" and the part I have cut off is because i thought it dint go with the sentence. As in that part sort of broke the flow with the rest of the sentence.
