During the four years of my time at Queen's University, I plan to integrate myself into the community in hopes of bringing my unique experiences and skills to the table. My goals while attending will be to network with industry experts, classmates, and professors while concurrently pursuing my passion for business both inside and outside of the classroom. I plan to do this by participating in a variety of clubs and conferences offered at Queens University.
I suggest you to start with some unique features of Queens and then integrate them with your goals. For sure, you need to have more emphasis and focus on your goals. But I feel it would flow better if you begin with what Queens offer and how you are going to make use of them for reaching out your goals.
Already, I have my eyes set on a delegates frosh rep. seat with high hopes to not only progress from there, but continue working my way up to a co-chair position. Reaching co-chair will allow me to influence, as well as provide assistance to others that share my passion for DECA. I also have also been exceedingly fascinated by markets such as FOREX and stock markets, and think that QFac will definitely be something worth looking into, as I hope to further expand my knowledge of investing and trading.
I like this ... sounds like a feasible goal :)