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"Would you please change the topic". This kind of response some people give back when they are asked these questions; What is your intended major? Why would you choose this major?But,as a matter of fact, these are the questions, which a student has to answer if he/she is intended to go to the college. There are different kind of majors in which people are interested.
However, My intended major is Computer Science. The reason why I chose computer science is that computers are the future and I enjoy working with computer and creating basic programs. I chose computer science as a major because computers will lead the way of future. Computers have become widespread and interface with almost every aspect of life. The field of computer science has a long and bright way to go.
However, on a whim, when I took my first basic computer programming intro class , I found it very interesting. Since then, I became very curious and excited about learning the basic computer programming. Now I want to choose computer science as a major to learn more and more about it and continue my career in this field. Although, the field of computer science is in my utmost interests , it can offer me a lucrative and beneficial career as well. Computer Science specialists can earn high salaries. That is also one of the reasons of choosing this field.
Besides, I can also apply for internship during my years in college. The experiences that I hope to gain in Computer Science will help me equip for a job with the real world. It will also provide an opportunity to utilize the skills that I have learnt in college.
However, my interest in this field developed when I listened to the interview of some of the CS graduates and there experience and feelings towards this field. After listening to that, I came to know that computer science is something really immersing and fascinating. It's not just the boring typing on keyboard; it is way more than that. It's a combination of technology, science and social aspects which really make it great. It's a new way of problem solving. It has a lot to do with ideas and creativity. The reason I love the field of computer science is that it is a very vast field. In this field, we can increase our knowledge, every moment. It provides us, a great platform to share our insights. As a matter of fact, computer science is not just about computers. It's even beyond the computers. It's about coming across new problems and sharing your ideas in solving those problems. I also want to experience those problems and then share my intellectual thoughts to solve them.
In short, Computer Science is a mystery for me, in which I want to go deeper and deeper in order to discover it.