While it is true that seeing such battles take place is exciting
While it is true such battles are an exciting experience,as I do not share the passion with which they engage themselves
as I don't share the same passion as they do. ... I feel it is implied since you mentioned about it in the earlier sentence
On first read, lines like "However, due to the geographical placement of the university, less emphasis is placed on engaging with faculty members in their academic pursuits in favor of emphasis on pursuing opportunities for political activism." came across as more of a criticism than a plus point.
This is a good comment by Aldo... I wish you pay attention to this point :)
Overall, I find this is a good essay and you sound very genuine with your reasoning. However, make sure that they (selectors) don't feel that you are more inclined towards theory and not practicals :)