1. WHY WOULD YOU LIKE TO STUDY AT THE DEPARTMENT OF BIOENVIRONMENT
I was born in a small town which is 30 kilometers far away from Ha Noi, Viet Nam or it is known as a suburban. I growed up in a peaceful and beautiful place. Everyday I saw the sun, though I could see it directly, I'd rather see it through a small shake an older wall where was full covered by moss. At that time, I felt a potential life that this small town bring to me.
Ha Noi University of Agricultural is my hometown. The place where I luckily was born, where my parents works for, where taked care my childhood and also have alimented my flaming dream- a professor of Bioresource and bioenviroment.
In my opinion, my life has a fate with agriculture. I remembered when I was only a little girl, I used to follow my mum to go to the labolatory.Waiting for my mother, I came around the room and saw some strange items which is known by me after a long time. She always went for making her experiments, then see wrote on the paper very quickly, she winced her forehead and sometimes she twisted her lips, smiled happily. How a great time I could see! I related to the scene when Acsimet found a greatest thing in the world, he said : "eureka" as kute as my mom's expression...
One day, once again, I found my destination for my dream, Kyushu university.I love Bioresource! I really felt impressed at the first time that I heard about you from my brother, who have just finished PhD there . I can't stand when he talked about you passionately and I suddently was gone to him. Fortunately, your school has have Department of Bioresource and Bioenvironment which is the strongest field in Kyushu in G30 project provide for international students an easy access to study in Japan. Then I thought : "Why not ???"
Day by day, I have gone step by step to find out more about you as a way to find my formulation to get my dream. I am happy to image that I'll work in a best laboratory, fly with my first invention as a real person for science. It makes me a chance to meet other people over the world, study and exchange the knowledges. My opportunities of working with many well-known professors together and study a lot
experiences for myself.
On the other hand, Japan culture also wake up my curiosity. I have heard about Fukuoka- the home of Kyushu University. With its mild climate, Fukouka is said to be one of Asia's most pleasant cities in which to live. Living at one of the World's 10 hottest cities that I've never had in my life. What an incredible thing!
" facing Global Challenges of the 21st century"- a message from the Dean of Kyushu University as a new giant propose now. I sincerely hope to study in your school and try my best to maintain and promote Kyushu' tradition together.
you need to correst the essay, as in there are a lot of grammatical errors. ex. growed up shud be grew up
full covered by moss - fully covered with moss
bring to me - brings to me
where my parents works for - where my parents work
where taked care my childhood - where my childhood was taken care of
I remembered when I - i remember when i
which is known by me after a long time - which i have known for a long time. etc.
the content is good!
