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"Key Club" - commonapp personal statement

prince_johri 3 / 14  
Dec 27, 2010   #1
prompt: elaborate on one of your ec (150 words or fewer)

As an active member for three consecutive years, Key Club has taught the conspicuous impact I can have in one's life simply through volunteering. Though the club participates in several activities such as collecting clothing for the neglected children, fundraising for UNICEF, and making Christmas-spirited cards for the ill, my most touching memory stems from a Thanksgiving can collecting task for the homeless. It required hours of door knockings, hanging posters around school, and assisting officers in organizing events to collect canned goods. It had given me the satisfaction of knowing that my hard work resulted with a blissful impact on somebody's life. As a committed member, I profoundly understand why this club is cherished as it allows students like me the opportunity to impact the greater cause. And I feel greater for it.

tiffany17 1 / 7  
Dec 30, 2010   #2
This is pretty good, but the last sense is kind of off, maybe you could connect it with the sentence before it.

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