the study of labor and economy
the studies of* ? unless it's just one study...
As an ambassador, extensive knowledge in these areas is crucial. Nevertheless, what intrigues me most about the School of Industrial and Labor Relations is its ability to nurture those with a wide range of interests.
the nevertheless statement doesn't fit exactly. and did u mention the ambassador topic earlier? "its ability to nurture those with a wide range of interests." what does this mean? that ILR nurtures __what__ with interests? <I'm confused here>
anypossible challenge
This aspect is also invaluable because of the unpredictable nature of global relations.
if possible, combine w. previous sentence?
I treasure this quality most because I know that with it, I can, once again, be the Superman that I have wanted to be.
Hope you mentioned this earlier too.
It's fine as a conclusion, but what was the prompt? somewhat stands alone here, and that doesn't make it sound as nice