I'm always worried about statements like this; it can give off the wrong vibe and make it sound as though you are interested in the school just because of its name/reputation
Also, being naturally competent at physics and logical analysis gave me an edge
maintain the same tense in your writing
As you can see it wasn't a really difficult decision I was making when I chose engineering as my labor of love.
Growing up in the mysterious land of India and playing hide and seek in its intriguing alleyways
I remember a river
choose either few or rare, together they are redundant
One of the earliest memories I have of my childhood are the
no comma after childhood
These are just some suggestions. I enjoyed reading your essay very much. Best of luck to you!