Lancaster as a capital city / Why Franklin and Marshall? Answers for F&M Supplements

two Franklin and Marshall Supplements 150 words and 100 words

Hi all these are two f and m supplement please make me cry and find critiques

On September 27, 1777 Lancaster served as the nation's capital for a single day. If you could do anything or be anyone for one single day, what would you do? (150 word limit)

"I would like to be someone famous." Was the first thought that went through my head when reading this prompt. After I began mentally cataloguing through all of the famous figures and stars I knew, I realized that it was petty. Why would I want to be a famous person? That got me thinking and I realized that the person that I wanted to be for a day is not a famous person but an ordinary man. I want to be a homeless man for a day. I would go out in the streets and see how people treat me. I would want to feel the cold and pain that a homeless man feels and how he is shunned by society. I would want to walk in the streets and get stared at with looks of disgust. Society would not care about me. People always take their life for granted but on does not appreciate his life until it's gone.

Why Franklin and Marshall (100 words)

Becoming a Diplomat is the best thing that could happen to me. I think that I would be at home with like minded people who care and are engaged in their education. The Housing system is also very interesting because of the leadership opportunities it could provide. By talking to a parent of an F&M student, I understood how much the faculty care for the students. She told me that "the F&M faculty genuinely care about the students. The kids seem genuinely happy to be at F&M" That is why I believe that I would be happy at F&M.

I like your first answer, really good! But I'm not sure about the last part of your second answer I understood how much the faculty care for the students. She told me that "the F&M faculty genuinely care about the students . I think here you are repeating the same idea.

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