My road of continuing school in America up to the process of applying to universities as a transfer student has been revolutionary.
What do you mean by continuing school ? That's not clear :(
In elementary school I remember attending summer school yet again, in middle school I hurdle out of ESL classes and having heard of the word college but knowing nothing else of the college world, I glided through high school.
This sentence too sounds confusing. You have too many ideas in one line and it's hard for the reader to have your ideas connected. I suggest you to re-phrase both these lines. If I can understand your idea, I could have given my suggestion for those too lines. But I really can't catch your ideas :(