amberisdead 9 / 28 Feb 1, 2011 #1Critique my essay please i will help you back!:)2. Describe your specific interest in beginning your Emory career at Oxford College and how you think our liberal arts intensive education is a good match for you.I believe that the freshmen and sophomore year in college are essential building blocks for a successful college education. Oxford College's liberal arts intensive education will better prepare me for a more specialised junior and senior year in Goizueta Business School.According to my research, the Oxford College curriculum integrates leadership and community service, preparing students to be life-long learners and socially responsible citizens. I wish to join the Leadership Certificate Program, where I will have a chance to learn how to be a leader and make a positive difference in school as well as in the community. Furthermore, classes at Oxford often involve collaborative learning and team projects, which is not common in other colleges. The skills I will learn at Oxford College are unique to the school; they will be essential and useful for life. Only at Oxford can I attain the academic maturity and leadership experience I need to fulfil my dream of becoming a Businesswoman.I particularly like the small community of Oxford College. A smaller community feels more like home: students are bonded and I like the feeling of having everyone as friends and working towards a common goal. Moreover, a small faculty-to-student ratio will ensure a more personalised and higher quality education. I will have the undivided attention of my teachers and professors, and thus making full use of the College resources.What Oxford College has to offer is what I have always wanted in a college: a top-notch yet exclusive education, a tightly-knitted student body and a chance to make a difference.
Anonymoussenior 17 / 133 Feb 1, 2011 #2Only at Oxford can I attain the academic maturity and leadership experience I need to fulfil my dream of becoming a Businesswoman.- is there a reason you capitalized businesswoman.I particularly like the small community at Oxford College.I will have the undivided attention of my teachers and professors, and thus making full use of the College resources.