Is "talk out" appropriate in the second sentence?
I think it is good. It means to vent and talk about issues until you feel better.
The way to improve this is to take out unnecessary words:
However, I head to a
slightly different place that provides me an equal amount of emotional satisfaction and relief.
not better. On my way,
there , I stifle my fatigue and liven up for the exciting next two hours. Shortly thereafter, I
finally arrive at my destination: the
local city library. With no time to lose, I
wear fasten my volunteer's tag and dash to the children's department.
See what I mean? Brevity is important.
I have
acquired a
much more sincere attitude toward my responsibilities
for other people after after personally witnessing the positive influence of my
effortless work in children's learning experience.
Adverbs and adjectives drain the life out of writing. :-)