Great essay! Just a few grammatical errors:
Afterall, aren't we all
should be "
After all, aren't we all"
representation of what makes Waldo,Waldo?
should be "representation of what makes Waldo, Waldo?"
I say would have, because the closest we
should be "I say would have because the closest we" No comma needed.
Pioneered by Watson, Crick and Wilkin, it took years of research, international collaborations and is certainly no mean feat
should be "Pioneered by Watson, Crick and Wilkin, it took years of research, international collaborations and
was certainly no mean feat." Should stay in past-tense.
Waldo is within us and represents our travails and tribulations; Only if choose to look at it from such a perspective.
should be "Waldo is within us and represents our travails and tribulations;
only if
we choose to look at it from such a perspective."
Great work!