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"Limitless Bounds" - Why Columbia


ingenium 5 / 13  
Dec 26, 2010   #1
Please tell us what you find most appealing about Columbia and why:

Limitless Bounds. Columbia may offer diversity and be located in one of the most history rich cities in the world: New York City. But to me, what Columbia offers the most is limitless bounds, both in the literal sense and figurative. In the literal sense, I am not confined to just New York City and Columbia. Through, Engineers without Borders, I can use what Columbia teaches me and apply it in a practical sense that will provide immediate help for those struggling around the world. Having family in India, particularly near Orissa, the India program particularly interests me. Working with Columbia and Engineers without Borders, I would like to make a healthy lifestyle, reality for those living in the Purnaguma village. Limitless Bounds. In the figurative sense this means that while at Columbia the sky is the limit for my education. With nearly 80% of the classes having 20 students or less, I will receive more individualized attention and have greater comprehension of the material. I cannot wait to work with Professor Henry Hess in the Molecular Engineering Laboratory and research and experiment with ideas that I have on biomolecular motors . The definition of limitless bounds is shown when Columbia engineering students built a playground swing for the disabled. I enjoy community service and combining that love with engineering would be a dream that could only come true at Columbia. Playground Swings. Biomolecular Motors. Purnaguma. Limitless Bounds. Columbia.
mikeehnow 3 / 30  
Dec 26, 2010   #2
I think that repeating the first statement was genius, but don't I thought it was limitless boundaries and I don't think that you should make the ending like that. "Limitless bounds. Columbia." is enough; you don't need the part about the playground swings abd biomolecular motors right in front of it. It might make you sound overdramatic, and no college wants that unless..., you know. Drama. Still, I enjoyed reading it!
ShadoPoig 11 / 36  
Dec 31, 2010   #3
Hey! I'm from CC :)

I'll just edit this here.

But to me, what Columbia offers the most is limitless bounds <<How can you offer an infinite amount of something more than something else? Why don't you say the most significant offering or something. , both in the literal sense and figurative.

Through, Engineers without Borders, I can use ...
Having family in India, particularly near Orissa, the India program <<Misplaced modifier. The program doesn't have family in India. particularly interests me.

... I would like to make a healthy lifestyle, reality for those living in the Purnaguma village.

... this means that while at Columbia, the sky is the limit for my education.

I think it's great! Very specific information.


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