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"And they live happily ever after";Happiness is considered important in our life.Why?


Mai Chu 14 / 17 1  
Sep 3, 2011   #1
Happiness is considered important in our life. Why? What factors are important in achieving?

"And they live happily ever after..."That is how a fairy tale usually ends ï with a happy ending. Long time ago, people always search for happiness and regard them as an important part of our life. But how should happiness be defined is a confusing issue. In my opinion, the definition depends on individual and there are two determinants in finding happiness.

Firstly, happiness is amorphous so it is described rely on each person. For example, some may say the state of being happy happens when they fall in love, others define it as a successful career. Consequently, each individual has his own understanding about happy: Love, money, success, fame and so on. In short, the diversity in diversity of happiness makes it difficult to define.

Moreover, there are two important factors in achieving happiness. The first one is give the best definition to oneself. He should have a clear picture about what he likes, what will bring him satisfaction. Only by knowing exactly one's desire, does he figure out the way to fulfill happiness. Take me as an example; I enjoy playing with number and statistic. Whenever I solve a difficult math question, I always feel excited and of course happy and I take it as a reason why my major is finance. This is the first step in making my life happier.

Additionally, the ability that brings more happiness plays a key role too. We can not deny that with ability, everything will be easier. What would happen if one feel like a job but he does not have enough qualifications for it. Will he continue to choose it? No, advisedly. Will someone be happy if he has to deal with all things out of his reach? No and this is the reason why one should consider carefully when defining the means to make he happy.

In summary, the ambiguity of happiness counts on single person and stating one's desire and his ability have significant impact on how happiness is achieved.

Help me to find out the mistakes. Thanks!
Denice 2 / 14  
Sep 4, 2011   #2
Firstly, happiness is amorphous so it is describedit's description rely on each person.

Consequently, each individual has his own understanding about happyhappiness: Love, money, success, fame and so on.

So far, those are all I could find as mistakes. Nice to meet you. You have an impressive idea about happiness. Just take a little consciousness about the grammar. God bless.XD
OP Mai Chu 14 / 17 1  
Sep 6, 2011   #3
Thanks Denice Joyce. I will try to correct my mistakes.
blynnleon 4 / 9  
Sep 6, 2011   #4
I really like the beginning about happily ever after, etc. I would help with grammar and wording, but it seems you have gotten plenty of corrections at least the same ones I caught.
Narsh 1 / 7  
Sep 6, 2011   #5
The content is there, and after those corrections already mentioned, it should be very nicely written/concise.


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