For those who see swimming only in the Olympics, the sport may look glamorous and easy. However living 11 years as a competitive swimmer I know it is anything bu
Maybe "it is anything but easy"?
Waking up at 5am six days a week, year round for a grueling two and a half hour practice has taught me to be dedicated and continue to try my hardest even when things get hard and I feel like giving up.
Confusing, misplaced modifier. Try this "Waking up at 5 am for six days a week for the grueling two and a half hour practice, I learned to be dedicated and to continue trying my hardest, even when things are becoming difficult and I feel like giving up"
I have turned down countless social invitations because I knew to train at the highest level and become a top competitor I could not afford to miss one practice or one mee
Kind of confusing, probably seprate them into two sentences?
I have become relentlessly hard working in everything I do and now crave a challenge in all aspects of my life, physical or mental.
"whether it is physical or mental"
Please help with my HKU essay, its due tomorrow