I love your essay! I was especially impressed by your first point, about throwing away for a time.
Your essay has some important points, but it has some gramatical mistakes.
a new idea on the TI-84 Puzzle Pack, all help ameliorate the harshness of a difficult problem, besides sometimes puzzles are just too hard for one person's brain to handle.
"besides" is not a conj. You have to use "and" instead, or separate this sentence into two.
And I can't really understand what you are trying to say by:
all help ameliorate the harshness of a difficult problem
to not dismiss even the most tangible idea
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not to dismiss even the most tangible
ideasAnd here are my suggestions of wording.
My love for puzzles had taught me many things. It taught me it is okay to throw away the pyramid puzzle pieces from frustration. As I am a human and more often than not, frustration will get me.
This is kind of redundant. How about this:
My love for puzzles had taught me many things. I now know it is okay to throw away the pyramid puzzle pieces from frustration. As I am a human, frustration gets me sometimes.
This let me to form the C3L6 chemistry challenge group
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led me to...
Good luck!