auteur. cool word
a lyricist of* or in? I'm not sure which one works.
not sure you need to say seven years. we hope adcoms can add
woah. you flop from acting to foreign exchange. you don't talk much about it.
une seule experience, s'il vous plait, ou vous pouvez ecrire plus
I like all the terminology... interesting stuff.
My final objectives are to develop an expert advisor (a trading Robot) that can carry trade efficiently.
you only state one objective...
I hope these independent studies in finance, my professional experience as a financial advisor, my experience in performing arts, will be a great contribution to the University's diversity of independent studies' styles.
I believe that these...adviser*...arts will ...UoR's...<what do you mean here? that UoR had many styles of ind. study? I don't quite get it>
overall, on the point, only last part is a bit hard to understand. good luck at UoR~