A Penn education provides a liberal arts and sciences foundation across multiple disciplines with a practical emphasis in one of four undergraduate schools: the College of Arts and Sciences, the School of Engineering and Applied Science, the School of Nursing, or the Wharton School.
Given the undergraduate school to which you are applying, please discuss how you will engage academically at Penn. (Please answer in 300 words or less.)
Last summer i went to the workshop where people fix their motor engines for a member of my big family called Nabeh who is a mechanical engineering . Nabeh was encouraging me to enter engineer . He knew i was very good in physics and mathematics and he know i am curious and physics filled that but he did not want me to physicist . Because the lake of jobs in physics field. He told me engineering is a flexible major and i can work anything i want whether in research field, in an company ,or even start up my own company . he took me the workshop and we deal that i will work with him for ten days u till the school start.i went cause i wanted to know more about engineering and do things with my hands . He told someone called Ali to learn me what every i want. Although Ali is uneducated,he knew how everything works and the physical and mathematical concepts behind it. He told me to chose a machine. I choosed a machine by which i can know whether the parts were broken. i was so slow in the beginning but i used to use the machine and i got faster and faster. i loved the work although i was not paid , but i did not care . All what i want is to do something new and excited . I went everyday for the next 10 days with a big smile on my face and an excited spirit . and after this exciting experience. i was sure that engineering will be my major. that a mixture of physics, mathematics , and dirty hands .
what do u think..? does it worth be written? i will use it in every question i asked why i chose engineering ?
From your essay I can tell that you have a great interest in the field of engineering, however, the essay is asking how will you engage academically- so, I believe you need to add to this essay- what you intend on studying, what kind of projects would you like to work on, what do you expect to master while you study, would you enjoy working with other students, and how passionate are you about gaining the best scores and finishing your degree, be sure to mention how this degree will help you reach your career goals. I edited the first few sentences for you, you still need to work on your grammar.
Last summer, i went to the workshop where people fix their motor engines for a member of my big family called Nabeh.whoHe is a mechanical engineerand Nabeh was encouraging me to enter the field of engineering . He knew that i was very good in physics and mathematics and he know i am curious and physics filled that butalthough I was interested in physics, he did not want me to be a physicist . Because the lake of jobs in physics field. He told me that a degree in engineering is a flexibleversitilemajor and i can work anything i want whetherwould have many opportunities in the research field, in a company ,or I could even start up my own company .
can u complete editing the grammer ?
he took me the workshop and we deal that i will work with him for ten days u till the school start.i went cause i wanted to know more about engineering and do things with my hands .
You could say it like this: "I had ten days before school started, and he took me to the workshop to spend that time working and learning about engineering."
He told someone called Ali to learnteach me whatever i want. Although Ali is uneducated,he knew how everything works and the underlying physical and mathematical concepts.behind it. He told me to chose a machine. I chose a machine by which i can knowthat was hard to know whether the parts were broken. i was so slow In the beginning I was slow, but i got accustomedused to using the machine and i got faster and fastergained speed . i loved the work, and although i was not paid , but i did not care . All what i want is to do something new and exciting . I went everyday for the next 10 days with a big smile on my face and an excited spirit . andA fter this exciting experience, i was sure that engineering would be my major. that aperfect mixture of physics, mathematics , and dirty hands .
Ben Franklin once said, 'All mankind is divided into three classes: those that are immovable, those that are movable, and those that move.'
Which are you?
(Please answer in 300-500 words.)
can i write this essay under this title ?
any help ?
