The small class ratios are an appeal because I believe strong connections with my professors will help me gain the best education possible.
This kind of sentence is never good. Don't waste any time acknowledging stuff they say on their website. Talk about YOUR specific plans and ideas.
I know there are many careers in this area of interest, so I would like to experience some of them before I make my decision. ----- this is very good!
I'm interested in the human body and how it functions.----- This is a little too obvious, because you are entering the field of medicine.
I believe the university fits my personality and will allow me to become an independent, well-rounded individual with its diversity. ---- Unless you explain how it fits your pers. or will enable you to be independent, this is meaningless.
Large campus, small class size, diversity... these are all cliches. Talk about articles you have read, medical procedures that interest you, and what kind of WORK you actually want to be DOING every day after you graduate.
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