I see myself to have operational knowledge
you should put "I see myself having operational knowledge"
My short term goal also comprise
Try : my short term goal comprises of the understanding of the basics..
Post MBA, working as a management consultant,
After earning my MbA I hope to work as a management consultant through which I would get exposure to..
You shouldn't abbreviate ..say business magazines
Many times this has infused in me the idea to start my own business venture.
After extensive reading I have become inspired to start my own..
These are just suggestions, after all I am only a student like you are. I like the last paragraph I think it is straight and to the point.