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Supplement - Massachusetts College of Pharmacy and Health Sciences


sincerelyydavid 2 / 3  
Dec 29, 2009   #1
Prompt:Please submit a brief 250-word essay discussing your reasons for choosing the specific health care career you wish to pursue
and why you are applying to MCPHS.
Any feedback is appreciated.
Thanks!

Stirring the mixed liquids together, I watched as the solution turn a shade of turquoise. Working out complicated mathematical equations in my head, I waited for an expected result to happen. Although my eyes were watering with suspense and my vision was blurry and dream-like under the protection of my glossy lab goggles, I watched as the solution bubble for a quick three seconds. I felt a sudden rush of excitement, feeling like a mad scientist, who just discovered something new in the world of chemistry.

I have always been fascinated by the workings life. I am pretty confident that pharmacy is something that I want to pursue because not only is it something that truly interests me, it also gives me a chance to contribute to society, in terms of assisting people obtain the correct medicines and most importantly, advising them about the correct usages of the medicines. It keeps surprising me how a job as simple as dispensing drugs and informing patients about any details of the drug is so important and essential to the well-being of patients.

I decided to apply Massachusetts College of Pharmacy and Health Sciences because it is a very "direct" school for people who are pretty convinced about the generalized, if not specific, field that they want to pursue career-wise - healthcare. In addition, it is easy to find people with the same interests because we are all under the same umbrella.
BlessedHands23 4 / 8  
Dec 29, 2009   #2
Its a good essay but it is sorta generic. You need to give some more info about wat particularly unique feature of the school appealed to you otherwise, i could just put any other college that and the essay still holds up
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Jan 7, 2010   #3
a sudden rush of excitement, feeling like a mad scientist, who just discovered something new in the world of chemistry.----so, in answer to their question, you say it is excitement that motivates your choice?

I have always been fascinated by the workings life. ----now it is excitement about chemistry and fascination with biology. Still, this is not very specific. Some people want to enter pharmacy because they want to find ways to get medicine to dying children. You should be bolder and more specific in your intentions.

I am pretty confident that pharmacy is something that I want to... be VERY confident..

...in terms of assisting people in obtaining the correct medicines and, most importantly, ad vising them about the correct usages of the medicines.-----this is just the normal task of a pharmacist. It is not such a god thing to say here, because it is so obvious. How is pharmacy related to your personal philosophy about life and medicine?

:-)


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