The correct prompt is: "Considering both the specific undergraduate school or program to which you are applying and the broader ..."
I don't know which is the correct prompt, but I'm going to give some ideas that I hope are useful...
The thought of
using numbers to paint a picture on a bare canvas, the though of using numbers to show growth or decline.
However, I am only sixteen years old
I found a positive correlation with my peers' Body Mass Index (BMI) and the rate of vending machine use which increased during lunch time often they use the vending machines. ---This is not surprising, but it is very impressive for a teenager to use correlative research.
Especially at the end here, iceui2 is correct. Be more specific: In order for me to achieve my goals I need an education and a community that will give me valuable tools. I need Penn.------Replace the words "achieve my goals" with the words that describe specific goals. Like this:
In order to ________, _________, and ____________, while keeping my options open and broadening my perspective, I need
an education and a community that will give me valuable tools
...need to join the students in the XXXXX program at Upenn.