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Math, continuous learning - Discuss the subjects you have excelled.


Lydia 6 / 13  
Jan 10, 2010   #1
Discuss the subjects in which you excel or have excelled. To what factor do you attribute your success?

Like every human being, there are certain thing in this life, which means a lot to us and makes us feel distinct from other people. For me Lydia kronmaah, math and science are what make me feel special. The reasons why I like these subjects is due to the following reasons, its interesting aspect, its roles it plays in the day-to-day life of us and finally because it is a non ending study.

Math and science, especially chemistry, have always been of my greatest subjects since I was I child. However as its interest took a tremendous tome and hard work to accomplish. My dream of being a nurse and perhaps a medical doctor is what led me to gaining much interest in the subject. Even though, in Ghana, the educational system is not as strong and firm as it is here, I still got attracted to it. My interest generated when, I was introduced to basic math and some pretty interesting fact about the origination of some math formulae, which I found really fascinating. In chemistry however, I became very acquainted to it through my first lab and chemical mixture. This lab experience made me read more about chemistry and enabled me why some things behave in certain way and why some things act as they are. This continuous seeking of knowledge got me attracted and very involved in the subject.

Secondly, I like these subjects, basically because of their important role they play in the daily live of each and every individual here on earth. Through math, we can figure and know how to construct and calculate things which are beneficial to our environment and ourselves. Math like chemistry play a significant role in the lives of us. The making of medicine and other vital drugs for the well being of mankind is due to the knowledge of math and chemistry. The counting of the days and the knowing of the rotations of the earth and seasons are all due to the calculations of math. These thing are what draws me very close to math and chemistry.

Finally, I like math and chemistry because of its non- ending study. In other subjects you study as far as others have gone before you, and there is apparently nothing more to know; but in the mathematical and chemistry pursuit, there is continual food for discovery and wonder. Due to this reason I am always curious to know what is going on out there and what new discoveries have been found and what is hiding out there, which I could discover for myself. A mathematical formulae like Newton's laws are laws which are constantly been used in daily life.

Despite the fact that I like math and chemistry doesn't actually mean that, I pay less attention to the other subjects. Every subject to me is very important and play vital roles in our lives. But I have taken math and chemistry to be my subjects of interest primarily because of their interesting aspect, their vital role in life and the curiosity behind its study.
Llamapoop123 7 / 442  
Jan 10, 2010   #2
My continuous learning and my obsession of achieving the best and becoming rank number 1 in my school, never really allowed me to know which subjects I have excelled most, but I guess the medals I got at the end of the school year revealed which courses I excelled most.

^You used "excelled most" twice, it sounds awkward. Are you really #1 in your school? And you sound kind of arrogant when you say that you're so good that you don't know what you're good at most.

I viewed each course as different steps I have to achieve to reach my goals. I have excelled in math and science the most.

^again with "the most" and the first sentence is random.

These two classes gave me an excuse to come to school everyday.

^an excuse to come to school? does that mean that you wouldn't go to school if you did not have these two subjects in your schedule?

Math is an easy but complex course to learn. It is complex it take more solving skills and adding a few extra steps to get the right answer. In other words it is simple because it takes only a few steps for people to do to be victorious with the answer.

^I'm thoroughly confused by this. I don't think that you need these general statements. Everybody knows what math is like.

Math was never my favorite subject. When I was in Ghana, I would be among the bottom 5. I had such a hard time with the class all the time and I used to say to myself that I was doing my best and my best got me in the bottom 5. I was in boarding school so I did not have any parent to help me with my assignment. My best friend on the other hand was among the top 5.

^Placing such emphasis on your placement amongst your peers does not demonstrate a lust for knowledge but rather a desire for unessential status.

My math teacher was not helpful. He would scream and make fun of me every time.

^unnecessary

Another liberal class I enjoyed learning and excelled was chemistry. The study of substances and the interactions between the different types of matter, especially electrons and understanding the way everything around us works fascinated me.

^You can't just add something randomly as an afternote. You mentioned science before and yet you did not explain that. Either expand it or delete it.
OP Lydia 6 / 13  
Jan 10, 2010   #3
thank you and I'm sorry I sound arrogant. I meant to say that I think I am good at all my classes and but receiving medals for math and science meant that I am good at them the most. I am not arrogant I hate writing essays n I know I am bound to make mistakes somewhere and I am # 1 in my school. I'm sorry but thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it. It helps a lot.
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12  
Jan 11, 2010   #4
...which mean a lot to us and make us feel distinct from other people.

The reasons why I like these subjects aredue to the following reasons,their interesting aspects , the roles they play in our day-to-day lives of us and finally because it is a non ending study.

Math and science, especially chemistry, have always been of my greatest...

...perhaps a medical doctor is what led me to gaining much interest in the subjects .

In chemistry however, I became very acquainted with it through my first lab and chemical mixture.
This lab experience made me read more about chemistry and taught me why some things...
Math, like chemistry, plays a significant role in our lives.

Finally, I like math and chemistry because of its non- ending study. you said this in the first paragraph.

Despite t The fact that I like math and chemistry doesn't actually mean that I pay less attention to the other subjects.

This came out much better than your first essay!


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