Other than the two of us, there was no one else was here at the office.
.... helped you with reducing one word :D
The impact of the story-I want there to be a clear connection between the medical supplies and my dreams to go into the medical field. CAN YOU SEE THE CONNECTION CLEARLY?
I feel you have achieved this because your response is in line with;
- "World" is a versatile term. The prompt gives "your family, community and school" as examples of possible "worlds," but they are just three examples. Where is it that you truly live? What really makes up your "world"? Is it your team? The local animal shelter? Your grandmother's kitchen table? Your church? The pages of a book?
Someplace where your imagination likes to wander? ... this is my framework for this task :D