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Million of water drops will converge into the ocean.
Since my hometown, Hainan, a serene island in the south of China, has become the International Tourist Destination, there is a boom in improvement of our society. This policy serves as a promoter of precipitation and converge the million of raindrops of my thoughts to my final ambition-encouraging people to make our hometown better by devoting individual power; besides, this background motive me to study abroad to see the global view about my hometown, seek the method to spread out beneficial mind, and find more practical way to solve environmental issues. I knew that it is not only the matter of environment, but also the population quality.
Although we are stepping towards the International Tourist Destination, there still exist some severe problem such as the noise and waste gases produced by vehicles, betel nuts juice everywhere on the main streets, narrow and chaotic road and natural disadvantage-frequent typhoons. I believe these situations can be changed by doing something. Consequently, from that time, I have searched for a lot of opportunities to let more people realize the essence of environmental improvement. Fortunately, I got a chance to volunteer in an activity spreading the mind of Low carbon lifestyle. We went to the biggest park in our city to shout slogan: Low-carbon life, high-quality life. At first, I was afraid that few people would notice us but after riding bike touring the whole park, I surprisingly found that more and more civilians joined us; some even gave the suggestion that our association should report the public view about the current environmental condition to the relevant department. This experience strengthens my ambition to deeply deplore about the world of sociology, which refers to the circumstances people live in.
Furthermore, I think mental infusion is equally necessary so I volunteered to be the counselor in Teenager Consulting Department to help teenager to set up their confidence with society and the world we share and also suggest them to do something good for our brilliant International Tourist Destination plan. There was one case that impressed me the most. I picked up the phone from a 19-year-old girl who was almost the same age with me and she told me that she did feel desperate about herself and wanted to suicide for several times only because she couldn't get along well with her classmate and overcome the tests. According to her narrative, I learned about that she was shy, nerd a little bit and never share the same interest with her classmates. Feeling it would be a good chance to change her and let her know the power she had to contribute to the society, I sincerely asked her to learn about the issue of International Tourist Destination, participate in group activity to propagate Hainan's beauty and try to discuss about it with her classmate. Few days later, she called in again and happily told me that because of her suggestion to host a pledge activity (which was similar to my law-carbon lifestyle advocating), most classmate began to communicate with her and exchange the personal viewpoints; what's more, she said that she decided to use International Tourist Destination as the topic of her final paper and she was confident about the academic test now. I was relieved.
Thanks to the certain circumstance in Hainan where I have been for almost 17 years, I know that wherever I am, I will automatically devote into the project of my belonged community by propagandizing, by educating and most important, by acting. Even though single drops can hardly change anything, millions of drops will contribute to a powerful ocean.
