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MIT ESSAY ON DAPARTMENT THAT APPEAL TO YOU


james23 3 / 8  
Dec 31, 2009   #1
The mechanical engineering department at MIT appeal to me because I am stunned with the research center at MIT and as well as my curiosity of technology. Control, instrument, and robotics research at MIT explode my heart of robotics and innovation of instrument that can be used in the field of surgery. My interest in mechanical engineering would helped my country Nigeria as well since is a developing country with new ideas and innovation because MIT is one of those colleges who is known for innovation with technology to help humankind 91 words
ngcoel - / 5  
Jan 1, 2010   #2
The mechanical engineering department at MIT appeals to me because I am stunned with the research center at MIT,and because of my curiosity for technology. Controls , instruments , and robotics research at MIT explode my heart (This is an awkward illustration. Use something a little more conventional to express your excitement?) for creating technologies that can be used in the field of surgery. My interest in mechanical engineering would help my country Nigeria as well since it is a developing country with new ideas and innovation (My suggestion here would be to describe in detail the ways that technology you develop at MIT can help your country. Is there a disease that needs curing? Are there children in need of a special surgery? Is there a technology everyone could use, but it's too expensive so you'd need to change that technology?). MIT is a college that is known for making technological breakthroughs to help humankind.

You're obviously a really interesting, dedicated and unique person who has a real desire to change the world because of your experiences. Let that shine through in your essay by specifying how you'd like to help your world.


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