From the MIT Application: We know you lead a busy life, full of activities, many of which are required of you. Tell us about something you do for the pleasure of it. (100 words or fewer)
Playing the piano has always been a pleasure, a strength and a passion for me. Ever since I began to play, the fuel for this passion has come from the sheer complexity of the instrument. The piano can go in any direction one wants to take it, and I've always been fascinated by these endless possibilities, literally, at my fingertips. With each piece and performance that I am exposed to, I realize just how much more can be accomplished. For me, it is this perpetual pursuit of betterment and achievement that is the pleasure and satisfaction of playing the piano.
Very good essay, I would also add what playing the piano makes you feel. Eg. Relaxed, proud of your skills, etc.
Very strong essay, I agree maybe adding a little bit of what kind of emotion the piano gives you. Or try to elaborate on the "betterment". I think colleges would love to hear that you love to improve and constantly make yourself better.
I also think it is very strong! The last sentence really brings it all together I think
Thanks for the help! There's a 100 word limit, and I'm right at the 100 words - would you suggest changing/taking anything out to add the additional emotional piece?
Woah, loving that last sentence! Great essay overall :)
