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Why are you interested in attending Georgia Tech and what do you hope to contribute to our community?
Moving to the United States gave me a rare opportunity which many people long for. I was given this great opportunity at a young age, and am still working hard to take advantage of these circumstances to their full potential. Realizing that my parents gave up everything they had and submitted to working constantly in order to give me this opportunity, is what fuels me to move forward and strive for success. I am interested in Georgia Tech because of the opportunities which will be available to help me reach my goal. In return for the privilege of education, I plan on contributing everything I have to the community, whether it's supporting the teams, helping with fundraisers, or participating in extracurricular activities. I hope that Georgia Tech and I, as well as the faculty and students, can bring the best out of each other through communication and cooperation.