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Mrs. Peneva- this kind, caring, extraordinary person - influential person


Hayley5 2 / 3  
Jul 5, 2012   #1
Hello, I'm a bad writer, but I'll be really grateful if you can advice me on how I can improve my essay . I know that there are grammatical mistakes... my english is not perfect. Thank you.

Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. And we are never, ever the same.

I would like to think that people are brought into my world and I into theirs for a reason. We have so much to learn from eachother and I treasure each and every person no matter if it's good or bad. I have learned something from them.

One of the people whom I was incredibly lucky to meet and has had a significant influence on me was my high school teacher - Mrs. Peneva.

I was in 7th grade when I met her for the very first time. And the the first thing that I noticed was her students behavior around her.

They were so calm and happy and just with a slight glance you can see how much respect thay have for her.
To my regred I hadn't the chance to be in her clasess until my last year in high school. Some of my classmates alredy had been in her clasess, but for the rest of us, the first couple of weeks were very interesting.

I had the chance to taste from her knowledge and the way she thought her lessons made me to really listen , to have that eager to learn. After every lesson she awlays managet to leave something new in my mind to think about.

During this last year in high school, she thought me the most important lesson -to always be myself and never change for anybody, to do what makes me happy and that it's OK to make mistakes in life, because mistakes are those who makes us wiser.

Each person that we encounter in our life can be considered as an experience in itself. This experience develops us as individuals , making us unique. I think that people whom we have met,and those whom we are about to meet throughout our life became a part of the person who me are.

Mrs.Peneva- this kind, caring, extraordinary person made me individual and
I can not be more greateful to her for having thought me the greatest lesson of all - life.
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
Jul 5, 2012   #2
Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts.

with this note, I dont think you are a bad writer :)

And the the first thing that I noticed was her studentsthe enthusiasm of the students in her classaround her .
OP Hayley5 2 / 3  
Jul 5, 2012   #3
Thank you so much I'll change it :) If you have more notes please.. feel free to let me know :)
sagittarius94 1 / 5  
Jul 5, 2012   #4
Dont use so many redundant words like never ever,,,just simply say never and lose the coma,,,and ur story is actually pretty good
OP Hayley5 2 / 3  
Jul 5, 2012   #5
Thank you!


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