Darkness
set in, gradually.
We were young, innocent and carefree, straining our necks and scanning the night sky, in search of space debris
having a death wish and comesthat was plummeting to Earth in a one way trip of no return.
As Earth brought us deeper into Her shadows, the stars also marche
d through the night sky.
Utilising my little bit of knowledge from my days reading astronomy books and surfing websites - what I call the 'armchair astronomer', I showed my schoolmates famous constellations in the night sky, explaining how meteor shower occurs and why does the stars rise and set too.
I think it's better if you write it this way:
Utilizing my little bit of knowledge from being what I call the 'armchair astronomer' - reading astronomy books and surfing websites - I showed my schoolmates famous constellations in the night sky, explaining how meteor shower occurs and why the stars rise and set like the Sun.At that moment, the familiar patterns of stars which I was once so crazy about
it long ago, they were calling out to me
; under the sky, I felt so at home.
In the blink of an eye, what
that was once a traveller of the cosmos has been incinerated into nothingness.
The brilliance of a burning meteor i
s at once captivating and transient, reflective of the place our lives stand
s in the course of the Universe's history.
I learnt
of a universal truth, so simple, so elegant yet so easily forgotten.
I love your essay:) It really shows your passion in astronomy. I hope my corrections helped. Review my essays too, please!