'nature of online gaming' - my short answer essay

Competetive nature of online gaming has always appealed to me. For me, there would be no meaning in playing a game without human involvement or interaction. Since the variables are human there is no golden rule that solves every problem. To be in a constant challange of analyzing everchanging situations and assesing them to tailor the best solutions is an exhilariting experience as it is a progressive activity to promote cognitive thinking in every day life.

When it comes to playing as a team the drive to succeed taught me if I am confident in my abilities stepping up as a leader is not a choice but a responsibility and sometimes the responsiblity is to be mature and ensure the succes of your fellow men in a supporting role. Even in most challanging match-ups I've learned that with tenacity and teamwork everything is possible, and the best way to function as a group is to listen to your teammates and benefit from every idea, as each of them is formed by unique experiences.

Why not give one example more detailed. one or two fact is more persuative. Besides, how to show your leadership? I think making a smart conclusion can also show your leadrership.

thank you for your response,

But I haven't exactly understand what you mean by detailed example: is it mentioning a particular game or explaining the leadership/support role further?

I am aware of the mild vagueness in the essay, I'm almost at the limit though (986/1000 chracters)

The competetive nature of online gaming appeals to me. Because the variables are human, there is no golden rule that solves every problem. Being in a constant challange of analyzing everchanging situations and assesing them to tailor the best solutions is an exhilariting experience, as it is a progressive activity to promote cognitive thinking in every day life.

When I play in a team, the drive to succeed teaches me confidence to step up as a leader, which is not a choice but a responsibility, that ensures the succes of my fellow men in a supporting role. Even in most challenging match-ups, I have learned that with tenacity and teamwork everything is possible, and the best way to function as a group is by listening to your teammates in order to benefit from their ideas, as each is a product of unique experiences.

What do you think?