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"NIKE Baseball Camp at Jackals Stadium" - Baseball Camp


chrispigs 2 / 4  
Nov 1, 2010   #1
Elaborate on An Extracurricular Activity or work experience 150 words.

During my time as a camp counselor in the summer at the NIKE Baseball Camp at Jackals Stadium, I learned about dealing with small children from the ages of six to fifteen years old. As a camp counselor, my main job was to instruct the game of baseball to the children, but sometimes I found that babysitter was a better title for my position. During my time at the camp, I provided water for the kids, picked up trash when they would leave it laying everywhere, break up fights, hold valuable possessions and even play a doctor's role in the brief absence of the camp director. In brief, I had many little tasks to accomplish while at camp that maybe prepared me for some future role. I have learned strategies to deal with children and to keep my composure in the oddest of situations in my time at camp.

Any advice or thoughts would be great
sungkyu1988 1 / 2  
Nov 2, 2010   #2
During my time as a -summer- camp counselor in the summer at the NIKE Baseball Camp at Jackals Stadium, I learned about dealing with small children from the ages of six to fifteen years old . As a camp counselor(repetitive), my main job was to instruct the game of -how to play -baseball to the children, but sometimes I found that babysitter was a better title for my position. During my time at the camp, I provided water for the kids, picked up trash when they would leave it laying everywhere(wordy), break(keep the verb tenses constant) up fights, hold valuable possessions and even play a doctor's role in the brief absence of the camp director. In brief, I had many little tasks to accomplish -accomplished many little tasks-while at -the-camp that maybe prepared me for some future role. I have learned strategies to deal with children and to keep my composure in the oddest of situations in my time at camp.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Nov 11, 2010   #3
...found that "babysitter" was a better title for my position. ----I like to use " " marks in a situation like this one.

...while at camp that may have prepared me for some future role. I have learned strategies to deal with children and to keep my composure in the...

I like this: oddest of situations

...in during my time at camp.

:-)


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