What are the unique qualities of Northwestern - and of the specific undergraduate school to which you are applying - that make you want to attend the University? In what ways do you hope to take advantage of the qualities you have identified?
since there is a rule against copying things from other websites, maybe you should keep an eye out for this next time ;)
heaven? sounds appropriate
use a fancier word, something like method or even better
I even earned the opportunity to
im not sure if u can use 'earn' for 'opportunity'
I even earned the opportunity to propose my own research project, to the supervising professor
u dont need the comma in the middle
and u actually dont need the next one either, they make the sentence confusing
an undergraduate program that allows students to explore a research topic of their interest
since the admission office knows about this, its just a waste of ur word limit to explain it
this is a great essay, good job!
but u spend a lot of ur words on the academics .. perhaps focus a bit on other things, ie. athletics, diversity, bla bla . although u write some bit about the humanitarian organization and some other stuff, i think u can involve more aspects as well!