PLEASE HELP ME SOS!!!
1. Describe a trait or characteristic that has been passed along to you by your family. Tell us why you like or dislike this aspect of yourself.
A trait that has been passed onto me by my family is perseverance. Since I was a young child, I was very patient boy. When someone tried to say something bad, I was thinking and thinking and finally come to the decision. I never had regret my decision. Patience is a thing that keeps me and helps me all the time.
2. New York City is an essential element of academic and cultural life at NYU. If you could engage in an activity or start a club or service organization at NYU, what would it be and how would you envision it impacting the larger community?
I would love to join in Drama/Theater clubs in NYU. That was the program that I was always looking for it. I think if I join in Drama/theater club, I can provide many experiences and guide young student who are interested in Art of drama.
3. You have been selected to sing in a talent show. What song would you choose?
I would sing "Breakaway" by Kelly Clarkson. It is very special to me because when I first listen to the song, I was very sympathized with my situation. From that moment, the song "Breakaway" became my favorite song and I bought CD right away. When I listen to the song, it gives me hope, courage and I feel very comfortable.
4. Please tell us what led you to select your anticipated academic program and/or NYU school/ college, and what interests you most about your intended discipline.
I was interested in Management and Drama/Theater since very young age. The advantage was that my dad runs manufacturing businesses in Korea, I have had a great opportunity to know how a company runs and this made me to choose a career in management. Also When I was in Korea this summer, I got a audition and the director said that you have a positive potential for actor. This gave me great encouragement that I have a potential dreams about being an actor.
Since I was a young child, I have been a very patient boy.
the example you are trying to give is not very contructive, try something else.
I would love to join the Drama/Theater clubs in NYU. It is the program that I always look for.
... provide many experiences and guide young students who are interested in Art of drama
not very solid, it sounds like you are not sure why you should choose this program.
... special to me because when I first listened to the song, I was very ...
a fine response, but this is a very typical one that anyone could have written. try to come up with something unique.
I have been interested in Management and ...
... Korea this summer, I got an audition and the director said that I have the potential to be an actor. T
I don't see why you like the schools or programs that NYU offers.
angela
I think you should actually read what you are writing, its incoherent man
arghuman82, your username is cool!! But your feedback is lacking. Part of your job as a member is to help people overcome language barriers by trying to interpret the meaning with them!!! :)
For example:
Perseverance is a quality that keeps me and helps me all the time.
The advantage was that my dad runs manufacturing businesses in Korea; I have had a great opportunity to learn how a company runs, and this made me to choose a career in management. Also, when I was in Korea this summer, I got an audition and the director said that you have a positive potential for acting . This gave me great encouragement to supplement my business aspirations with a trial at being an actor.
