I need advice on what I could do better on these supplement questions.
1.Tell us why you have chosen the above campus (NYU New York)? (maximum of 700 characters)
Since I will be majoring in sports management, the location of NYU New York will present more opportunities than what other schools can offer. New York is home to eleven major league sports team. The headquarters of the NBA, WNBA, NFL, MLB, and MLS are also located in New York (I need this word this differently...). NYU New York will give me the best chance to gain hands-on experience in the sports industry while attending school. Not only is New York known for their sports, New York is known for its diversity. I have grown fond of cultural diversity since my parents opened an international food store, and the diversity within NYU New York will expand my horizons.
2. NYU's global network provides students with hundreds of academic areas of interest for students to cultivate their intellectual curiosity and to help achieve their career goals. Whether you are entirely undecided about your academic plans or you have a definitive program of study in mind, what are your own academic interests? Feel free to share any thoughts on any particular programs or how you might explore those interests at NYU on any of our campuses. (maximum of 1500 characters)
My passions are sports, business, and diversity. When you combine the two, it equals sports management. The sports management program at NYU New York provides a holistic approach into the major. I noticed the required courses in the sports management curriculum fit me perfectly. I would have pursued courses in foreign language and psychology if it were not required. The Preston Robert Tisch Center offers events that will give me opportunities to connect with experts and professionals in sports management that other schools cannot offer. The Tisch Center Career and Internship Fairs throughout the year will give me the ideal opportunity to meet hiring managers from sports organizations. The convenience of the location of New York is unbeatable. It allows me to intern and attend school throughout the school year. The diversity of NYU New York and the city will allow me to get a deeper glimpse into different cultures.
3. What intrigues you? Tell us about one work of art, scientific achievement, piece of literature, method of communication, or place in the world (a film, book, performance, website, event, location, etc.), and explain its significance to you.
I do not really know how to answer this question but I have an idea. Please let me know if my idea works!
Since I will be a sports management major, I want to write that sports can bring the world together (Olympic Games). Do you think that will work?
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Since I will be a sports management major, I want to write that sports can bring the world together (Olympic Games). Do you think that will work?
I think it sounds cliche. I recommend you to write about the book "Football Against the Enemy" by Simon Kuper. This book talks about the influences of cultural, political and national identities on football.
