NYUgrl 2 / 3 Oct 21, 2011 #1Guys, i really need help. I really need to sell this essay but i don't know how to start! Help!
OP NYUgrl 2 / 3 Oct 21, 2011 #2I could tell you a heartfelt sentimental poignant story of first seeing the NYU AD campus picture and feeling first deep emotions stirring somewhere inside my spleen. Or I could meticulously paraphrase the numerous articles about NYU AD that I have perused. And I probably would resort to one of these strategies, had I not some real incentives to attend NYU AD. They are based on what I have learned from the NYU AD website, general knowledge, conversations I have overheard, and other miscellaneous tidbits of information sent to me by friends.
AzharyN1 - / 6 Oct 21, 2011 #3Some sentences sound a bit vague, try being more precise. For example, "Or I could meticulously paraphrase the numerous articles about NYU AD that I have perused." what kind of articles?
