Alhadhrami 1 / - Dec 31, 2009 #1I know it is too late but i really need help please do review itPERSONAL STATEMENTSIf you had the opportunity to spend one day in New York City with a famous New Yorker, who would it be and what would you do? (Your New Yorker can be anyone - past or present, fictional or non-fictional - who is generally associated with New York City; they do not necessarily have to have been born and raised in New York City.Nothing would be more pleasant than spending one day in New York City with a passionate, enthusiastic and resilient man like Donald Trump. I admire how he turns failure to success. Over viewing Manhattan from the top of the Trump world tower and listening to his story would be very intriguing. After having a walk in Central Park, Later I would challenge him in a game of Golf where he could tell me more about his experience. Finally, I would ask him where he got the insight of his words: "In the end, you're measured not by how much you undertake but by what you finally accomplish".Please tell us what led you to select your anticipated academic program and/or NYU school/college, and what interests you most about your intended discipline.I am a person who finds satisfaction in helping others and seeing how people live in Yemen makes me even more determined to make a change in their lives. Therefore, I decided to pursue economics as a major. In Yemen half of the people live below poverty line, unemployment is very high, and corruption is widespread. My interest in economics grew out of concern for improving public policy. I am a problem solver who thinks from a wide perspective and always finds creative solutions to challenging Problems.
jubajum 2 / 4 Dec 31, 2009 #2"After having a walk in Central Park, Later I would challenge him in a game of Golf where he could tell me more about his experience."--not sure if you took out a phrase, but take out Later.I like your second prompt, but is there a greater connection to Yemen, it feels as if you could replace Yemen with any country.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129 Jan 8, 2010 #3Over v Viewing Manhattan from the top of the Trump world tower and listening to his story would be very intriguing.Don't capitalize golf.Tell what you have in common with Trump.I am a person who finds satisfaction in helping others, and seeing...:-)
umulbaneen 4 / 27 Jan 8, 2010 #4change "I admire how he turns failure to success." into"I admire how he turns failure into success."but generally your first answer is very vaguewhen they say write about a new-yorkertheir not trying to measure that persons greatness but yours--you need to highlight yourself morebe more comprehensive as to why u want donald trump --how he relates to you-- try highlighting your own qualities by the help of donald trumplike maybe instead of just stating donalds quote...try somehow answering it via your life experiences or somethinggoodluck