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NYU supplements ("My mother and I are filial")


xinix 3 / 3  
Jan 1, 2009   #1
I am very bad in writing, and some of the answers are too much. The word counts here include blank space. All comments welcome. (max 500 characters for each prompt)

1. describe a trait or characteristics that has been passed along to you by your family. tell us why you like or dislike this aspect of yourself.

My mother and I are filial. We show filial obedience differently. My mom has phone calls to my grandmother weekly to chat with random topics. My mom also invites my grandmother out to lunch often. My own way to care about my mom is to keep her content. I try my best to maintain a good academic record. My mom can not speak English well. This is one of the main reasons that I chose colleges inside New York. (412)

2. new york city is and essential element of academic and cultural life at nyu. if youu could engage in an activity or start a club or service orginazation at nyu, what would it be and how would you envision it impacting the larger community?

I will engage in The Martial Arts Club at NYU. Through martial arts, people could learn self defense and have a chance to exercise. Practicing martial arts is a way to release pressure from the society. Through martial arts lessons, messages about respect and right way of using martial arts are clearly indicated. (319)

3. you have been selected to sing in a talent show. what song would you choose? why?

In a talent show, the audience consists of many different age levels. I would choose to sing Good Charlotte's "Thank you, Mom." My mom is a single parent. She works very hard to provide my sister and me a better education. Her hands were smooth but now they are rough and full of little cracks. With out my mother, I would not be living and think of going to college. My mom is a motivation to me. Just like part of the lyrics, "I'll always thank you, more than you would know, than I could ever show."(502)

4. please tell us what led you to select your anticipated academic program and/or nyu school/college, and what interests you most about your intended disipline

I am still undecided, but I prefer to go to NYU. I like to play with numbers. Before taking college accounting at 12th grade, I thought accounting is all about putting in numbers. After several weeks, I found out accounting is really about analyzing and use numbers to make decisions. This class is more challenging than expected. My teacher often related the lessons to other area of business. I understand accounting is a type of language and I want to learn higher level of accounting. I also know that NYU offer good business programs. (542)
EF_Sean 6 / 3,491  
Jan 2, 2009   #2
"My mom has phone calls to my grandmother weekly to chat with random topics. My mom also invites my grandmother out to lunch often" Try instead: "My mom call my grandmother weekly and often meets her for lunch." Add more about what you like or dislike about the quality you have chosen as well.

"Through martial arts, people can learn self defense and have a chance to exercise.

"In a talent show, the audience consists of many different age levels. " Omit this. It has nothing to do with the topic.

For number 4, rewrite to focus more on why you are interested in accounting.


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