i feel like this essay has good topic, but isnt written in the best way.
already happing fast in our days
of how to choose correctly one's PC
which pieces of hardware better interact one with another.
i think a specific example of this would replace this generalized statement
I cannot watch people, how they without knowing what they are buying and being persuaded by the seller, spend their money on a laptop that they think has a high performance and after some time they end up with an old technology workstation.
that sentence doesnt make much sense
maybe: I cannot bare to watch buyers purchase a laptop solely on the deceitful persuasion of a seller. Although they believe they have found a high performance machine, what they truel purchased was an overpriced, outdated piece of technology.
overall, good topic, shows insight, but needs some work to convey the message more strongly