Victor Hugo's words have propelled me to seek an education in order to break the barriers imposed upon my culture.
Deprived of a normal childhood, I was obligated to work incessantly in order to help provide for themy financially unstable family l was born into .
My honesty, my commitment, my dedication, my determination, and my desire to succeed portray a future where I will overcome the various obstacles that stand in my path. With education I will slay the stereotypes that exist. I will rise above the limitations and constraints that society has imposed upon me. The fact that my family has suffered through years of deprivation, degradation, discrimination, and exploitation cannot and will not change, but with education I will end the cycle of poverty that my family finds itself in.
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I will continue to work hard in order to distinguish myself, for with education, my way to prosperity and success,will never impossible and rugged I will pave a path for future generations to follow, thus "closing various prisons".
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Overall your essay is good. You clearly show us your idea. Maybe you can concretely show us how you decided not to give up education.
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