lrnsmith09 5 / 11 Dec 27, 2008 #1I haven't quite finished it yet but I was wondering if I could get someone's opinion on what I have so far.Here's the prompt:What work of art,science, mathematics, or literature has surprised, unsettled, or challenged you and in what way?And here is the intro to my essay:There I was sitting in orchestra classs playing one of the most beautiful instruments know to man and all I could think was "why is this happening to me?" I couldn't fathom why some would write a piece as popular as Canon in D and completely desregard the depth and resonance that the sound of the cello carries. My teacher tried to console me, tried to reassure me that my part was as important as any other and that one mistake from me and the whole piece would be ruined,but I could'nt hear him. All I could here was the beautiful melodies that the violons and violas were playing dancing thourhg the air and seemingly mocking me and my eight continuous quarter notes...Am I off to a good start? do you think it adresses the prompt?Thanks!