Paint a verbal portrait of an ideal physician and tell us about the experiences that you have had which have helped to shape this ideal.
Prior to the seventh grade, I had never experienced any serious injury in which I was in need of a doctor. However, one experience showed me the manner of a true physician.
When I was 11 years old, I obtained a foot injury while I was in school. Sharp spasms of pain shot through my foot and ankle after my foot slipped down the long staircase. Since walking became a challenge, I was wheeled over to the school's main office and was sent to a local hospital. When I arrived there, a radiologist took several x-rays of my foot. I was later seen by a doctor who handled my injured foot with meticulous care and carefully examined my x-ray photos with astounding precision. The small fracture in the tarsal of my right foot was so tiny that it seemed almost invisible to my untrained eyes. However, the doctor pinpointed the fracture as if it were clearly marked. The doctors who cared for me showed that their sole concern was to tend my injury and make sure that I received proper medical attention.
My experience with my foot injury has helped shape my ideal of a model doctor. An ideal physician is compassionate and would express selflessness to all of his patients. Although he may be fatigued or concerned with other matters, the wellbeing of his patients should be his primary goal while in the workplace. A physician must also be optimistic, but he must always tell the whole truth regarding any situation. His sole purpose while on the job is to care for and help patient I have been cared for by many doctors and hospital staff members that have some of these ideal qualities. Their benevolence and altruism is the reason that I am here today.
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