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Parents and Teachers Association - solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform



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Apr 1, 2026   #1
In 2021, as Head Girl of Animwarao JSS, I reformed our chaotic Parents and Teachers Association (PTA) day. The old system forced parents-including elderly grandparents-to walk between distant, hot classroom blocks to find teachers. Seeing them exhausted and confused, I identified a systemic failure and took action.
Leadership & Creative Reform:
Four days before the event, I convened a meeting with the student leadership, form captains, and the Deputy Principal. I practiced inclusive leadership by presenting a new plan and actively seeking their critiques. We reached a consensus to move the entire event to the school hall (Mwaneaba). I designed a "Centralized Hub" with a large rectangular table layout where teachers sat inside at designated spots, allowing parents to roam the perimeter easily. To address the heat and hunger, I creatively integrated a Form 3 fundraising café, providing refreshments while generating graduation funds.
Execution & Results:
I used strategic delegation to ensure a smooth flow. I assigned Senior Prefects as navigators to guide parents and Deputy Heads to manage registration slips, while I personally oversaw the final distribution of academic reports. I also managed resources responsibly by involving only Form 3 students in the heavy setup, ensuring younger students got home safely on time.
The result was a seamless, dignified event. Parents and staff praised the "positive flow" and the lack of physical strain. By centralizing the process, I transformed a disorganized day into a professional school tradition.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 16083  
Apr 2, 2026   #2
This essay shows that you are an effective planner, but not necessarily an effective leader. The event was more disorganized than chaotic. I do not see this narration as showing your leadership skills in as much as it highlights your organizer skills. Which of the two are you trying to make the central point of this presentation?

A major weakness of this essay is the lack of proper teamwork, leadership, and problem solving on your part. While you did seem to solve a challenge, you did not report on the problems that happened on the day itself which you had to solve, which would have shown teamwork and leadership skills on your part as you made the effort to implement change with regards to the PTA meeting. There needs to be a mention if you were also able to institutionalize the change so that it would be seen as a real reform by the reviewers of the scholarship program. Addressing the issues I have presented will help strengthen your response paper.


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