I like if you had given some specific indication that you are really looking forward to experiencing that kind of life.
. I want to be able to take a bus around the city and see the architectural wonders, museums, shops and cafes.
I like if you have this after the next sentence because I feel it arranges a better flow. Then the reader would know why you like to take such a ride and hang around in cafes and shops.
I think this is well written!
Good point by Anumeha. Yes, your response is quite well written, but try to enhance its effect with the above suggestion.